Practice Paper B—Score Level 4
The response:
• Develops all aspects of the task
• Is both descriptive and analytical (United States acquired weaker nations sometimes using force to
gain new commercial outlets and trade markets; acquisitions resulted in much wealth and prosperity;
interested in getting more territories to add wealth and gain respect of other nations taking land
outside their borders; economy slowed down in 1890s which meant new commercial outlets needed to
give American businesses chance to trade in new places; freeing Cuba from Spain’s rule moved
United States toward controlling Puerto Rico and Philippines; treaty ending Spanish-American War
continued a difference of opinion that divided country into imperialists and anti-imperialists; some
thought United States could help civilize countries and give them good schools, orderly systems of
justice, modern transportation networks, and new jobs; some thought use of force in Philippines or
anywhere else was unconstitutional; some felt use of force in weaker nations against their will was
wrong as might does not make right; Republicans believed American public approved of imperialism
because United States had to take care of weaker countries such as Philippines; Republicans such as
McKinley liked idea of America becoming world power and having colonies; decision to keep Puerto
Rico and Guam and acquiring Samoa and Wake Islands helped establish United States as a world
power; anti-imperialists in Democratic Party argued just like fighting Filipinos expensive it is also
expensive to take care of new territories)
• Incorporates relevant information from all the documents
• Incorporates relevant outside information (Spain active in Latin America and Great Britain in North
America; new trade could improve national economy and be good for national interest since it might
lead to less unemployment and less unrest among workers and farmers; not allowing Cuba or
Philippines to be immediately independent was seen by some as wrong and out of character for
America; in Philippines the United States had to send army to secure power and authority over
country that wanted independence; when people voted for president or congressmen they would have
to consider whether they agreed with imperialists or anti-imperialists; anti-imperialist concerns about
nation’s limitations outside hemisphere weakened as United States built large navy; gave millions of
dollars to nations to help rebuild after World War II and contain communism; wealth of United States
helped fund new technology for arms race that helped win Cold War)
• Supports the theme with relevant facts, examples, and details (America grew to 48 states by 1890s;
United States gained respect of nations such as Russia, Germany, Italy, Austria, and Japan as it took
over valuable territories such as Hawaii; imperialists thought United States would be good for
countries and their resources and markets good for us; President McKinley thought it was important
to control Philippines to provide law and order; American Anti-Imperialist League held conference in
Chicago in 1899 and reminded people governments derive just powers from consent of governed;
map of United States territories and leases shows efforts of those who wanted to acquire possessions
successful; acquired enough power and money to fund world wars and Cold War)
• Demonstrates a logical and clear plan of organization; includes an introduction and conclusion that
discuss the role wealth plays within the United States policy of imperialism
Conclusion: Overall, the response fits the criteria for Level 4. Conclusions demonstrate a good
understanding of how economic factors dominated the imperialism debate in the 1890s. Some analytic
statements support a strong connection between the debate and civic participation; however, additional
analysis and more detailed connections would have strengthened the effort.
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